The paper is well-written and very interesting. I think it is a good contribution to the current literature; however, I just have the following comments:In the abstract, the author mentioned that the data used for analysis covered the period 2006 to 2020. However, in the data section, the author mentioned that he was hoping to get the sample data from 1999 to 2022. I think it is not relevant to indicate why he was not able to get the sample from 1999 to 2022, so this passage should be deleted unless the data covered that period.The author should explain more about the type of regression technique used in the analysis. He did mention the regression formulas; however, I think it needs a little more clarification.The results from the analysis should be better displayed, i.e., the results from the software analysis.The author is better off using APA style in referencing; I am not sure what style of citation he was following.Otherwise, the paper is good for publication.
